User:Bcmcelwee03/1999 İzmit earthquake/Dtkraft Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Group members: Bcmcelwee03, Alwyn2105, Akipar, Will Mullally


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bcmcelwee03/1999 İzmit earthquake


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1999 İzmit earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think it is a great idea to re-format the lead and add more information because it doesn't give a brief overview of everything else in the rest of the article. The information you put in your damages section doesn't really have anything to do with damages but you could just rename the section to damages and casualties. It seems you want to add a future risk section which is probably a good idea since you mentioned that Marmara is resting on a seismic gap. I think it will be somewhat hard to edit this article since it is C-class and not stub or start but the article already has a lot of sources so maybe you could look through them for any information that isn't used in the article

Response - Bridget McElwee
Thank you for your review, I will look deeper into the article's sources to try and find more information about the future risk, as well as re-working the lead and damages sections.