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Write better articles:
WP:NOT  |   WP:BETTER   |   MOS:W2W   |   WP:CONCISE | 	WP:FIXCLOSEPARA | WP:POSA

Show, don't tell
Replace statements with the facts that back them up. Instead of:


 * The Yankees are one of the greatest baseball teams in history.

Write:


 * The New York Yankees have won 27 World Series championships (cite)—almost three times as many as any other team (cite)

Principle of least astonishment

 * In the article ' Joe Biden'
 * Joseph Robinette Biden Jr. is an American politician and the president-elect of the United States.
 * Comment:     Eye roll
 * In the article Live-line working
 * Electricity is hazardous
 * Comment: Shocking
 * In the article Notre-Dame de Paris fire.
 * Some lead joints in stained glass windows melted in the heat of the fire.
 * Comment: DUH.
 * Template:Vague
 * No original research so then find Independent sources
 * No original research so then find Independent sources

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