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Activity 2: 2006 NRL Grand Final Brisbane Broncos vs Melbourne Storm

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=2006_NRL_Grand_Final&oldid=331728168

This above major article of the 2006 NRL Grand Final between the Broncos and the Storm outlines in about 50 words on each half of the scoreline and the sequence of events. If I was this editor I would have provided some background information into both teams run into the finals, I would feel that its important to provide the reader with this information to provide context of how the NRL finals work, to emphasise how both teams made it to the night of the Final.

If I was a second editor I would add information into the pre-match events such as pre game entertainment, I would also add statistics into the size of the crowd, the location of the game etc. Furthermore, I would add information into the post match celebration such as man of the match. Furthermore, I would add in both team lists to provide the reader with the background information to know who played in such a game.