User:Bdesmond01/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Vladimir Golenishchev - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I thought it would be an interesting topic to research. The article is also very small so I think that there would be a lot of room for improvement.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of the article is good and gives a good general description of why he is a notable figure but it could use a little more description. The overall status of the article details mostly the well known artifacts that he discovered in Egypt but there are no citations on anything under the "Life" heading. There is not much on his early life or where he is from so there is a lot of room for improvement on that subject. The tone of the article is neutral and doesn't show any bias. The legacy section is very small and needs work. The entire page needs citations as there are only citations for his past names and a statue of him. There doesn't seem to be any grammatical issues in the article.