User:Bdlogan90/Pain management/Eyannaib Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bdlogan90


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bdlogan90/Pain_management?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great article! I see a spelling error in the first word. I also think the first sentence could be a little clearer. The word 'recommend' in the 4th sentence should be changed to recommended. I would split the 1 paragraph into two and label one gender roles in pain management so that things can flow better. You have included 0 references and I think including at least a couple will be benficial for your article.