User:Bdmparker/Cyber security awareness/Svn38 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bdmparker


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cyber security awareness
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Thank you for the opportunity to review your article. This article is an important topic area.

I like how the lead starts; there are several direct and clear statements. Note that two of the latter sentences in the lead section would benefit from having a cited source.

One observation is that I am not sure what direction the article is taking. The lead appears to try to justify the importance of cybersecurity training and recommends employee education. The title “Cyber security awareness” seems to be missing a modifier like “Importance of”, “Elements of”, or “Cybersecurity awareness training”. Unless the article covers a broad spectrum of cyber security awareness, then the current title may be fine.

Depending on the scope of the article, more section headings would help organize the information for readability and serve to guide the development of the article. For example, the article could continue to use “Overview” and then add sections that develop the article’s intent. Would it be helpful to describe the audience? Who are the users that need to be cyber aware? It may be interesting to show the types of users and then explain some of the threats and tactics that the user could experience.

There appears to be a good balance of references that are of high quality on the topic. These references reinforce a topic describing cyber awareness, the importance of training, types of attacks, and how to mitigate vulnerabilities.

Also, please take a look at reference [11] to CyberStream. The link does not take you to any specific page, only to the site’s homepage.

Lastly, consider how you want to develop the article and whether the topic has a specific direction, such as  “Cybersecurity awareness in health care,” a wider topic area, or a different focus.