User:Bduke2020/West Chester Golden Rams/Abswag2121 Peer Review

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This is a very short and condensed article to begin with, which isn't a negative thing considering what the article is about. Seems to be more chart/statistic-involved more than anything. There are hyperlinks scattered throughout but it's inconsistent, meaning not everything is hyperlinked. Just something I noticed immediately. I would suggests adding more in-depth detail and information in the introduction/beginning section. May be add in some historical information to round out the the Golden Rams' success in sports. There is plenty opportunity to add in more text in this article.