User:Bduke2020/West Chester Golden Rams/Eodeh23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bduke2020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * West Chester Golden Rams


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead and opening paragraph are clear. They summarize the main idea and effectively introduce the topic.
 * There is an overview of the content of the article.
 * There aren't any grammatical errors.
 * I suggest adding some information about other teams like the Basketball team.
 * References are accurate and mostly current. Sources are credible and reliable.
 * The sections are simple and concise.
 * The breakdown of the topics is clear and organized.
 * I suggest adding more information about other achievements for sports teams, like the women's soccer team this season.