User:Beachlover12/Content editing/Lastolympian01 Peer Review

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1spidey3, Beachlover12, BraunBB, Yankeegirl11
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The article has a well written in depth description of what content editing is and what disadvantages it has.

From what I can see on dashboard not much written in the bibliography or sandbox.

While it is detailed and has good information, it just looks more could be added with the lead ans possibly new sections. If a complications section exists than an advantages section could be added or a section on comprehensive editors.

More sources could be used and if possible the general section could be more concise or split up into new sections.

Overall its is just very short if possible maybe add another section and if the message from Wikipedia is still relevant to follow their advice.