User:BeastMode4403/U.S. postal strike of 1970/Cjhartford20 Peer Review

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 * U.S. postal strike of 1970

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In the impact section, the content and information added gives insight into the comparison of salaries between postal workers and sanitation workers. The section shows how the postal workers unionized and came together to apply pressure on president Nixon and increase wages. The main article does not mention these statistics in which it focuses mainly on the strike itself.

One suggestion for the 'American Postal Workers Union' would be to add a source to confirm the history of St. Paul and Minneapolis. The section added provides information about the NAPFE and its aim to protect the rights of African American postal workers. The content provided is strong and well written. The hyperlinks are placed in an orderly fashion to ensure any uncertainty. The content is backed up by reliable secondary sources.

In the American Postal Workers Union section, I thought quality content was added to a previously very slim section of the article. One thing that could be added was some sort of visual picture. There are only two pictures throughout the whole wiki article and another one would work well.

Under the Impact section you talk about Nixon signing the Post Reorganization Act which increased postal workers salaries, I think this is very relevant to the topic but one thing you could add is what year it was signed.