User:BeastMode4403/U.S. postal strike of 1970/Kjlynott22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

beastmode4403

TheWikiBob


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BeastMode4403/U.S._postal_strike_of_1970?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * U.S. postal strike of 1970

Evaluate the drafted changes
Under the impact section I think it would help if you went more into depth on why they went on strike.