User:Beauchateau9/Mood Management Theory/G Kielkucki Peer Review

The content of your article is informative and very well written. I think that the strongest part definitely lies with the evidence section of the article, I actually learned quite a bit by reading this. If I had anything to add, I would see if you could add anything to the challenges section, maybe adding in a bit more information, examples, etc. I would also see if there was like a flow chart or something that you could add to the article as a visual example (idk, Amy has stuff like this on the slides sometimes). I know that some people tend to be more visual learners, so this could be helpful. But this is very well done and you guys are doing great!!

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