User:Beckie19/Positive psychology/Savannaj13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

beckie19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Beckie19/Positive_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Positive psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is off to a great start! The Lead has been updated and edited by my peer with detailed and cited information. It has a great starting statement that introduces the topic of the article. Most content added is up to date, relevant, and interesting for readers. It seems Professor Rahn has let you know about any citation issues. All content added so far is neutral. There is no attempt to persuade. The author is simply presenting information. So far, everything is organized. Remember to break the sections up once you have more content. I look forward to seeing what images and media you might add! I believe this is a really great beginning to a successful article.