User:Beckie19/Positive psychology/Tiffanyrodi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Beckie19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Beckie19/Positive_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Positive psychology
 * Positive psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits made to the original article do a good job of making the article stronger. The wording before was awkward and the author re-wrote it so that it had a better flow. The links worked in the references but one of the articles was restricted so I could not read it. The references were formatted well except for the 2nd one, it need additional formatting. The references in Wiki are hard to set up and are not intuitive. Good job on correcting the spelling of holistic, the original spelling made the article appear untrustworthy.