User:Beckie19/Positive psychology/Vvinziant Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Beckie19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Positive psychology - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Positive psychology - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Beckie19 I took a look at the positive psychology article and there is a place in the article under basic concepts that mentions that positive psychologist try to help people accept their past, etc. but it does not mention how they do this. Maybe you could add to that part of the article and talk about that. The lead for this article starts with a introductory sentence that states the two main topics of the article. I do believe that there are a couple topics and content that does not relate to the article and probably would not make a difference if it was there or not. The only thing I can say about the tone of this article is that since the topic is positive psychology, it does talk about being positive and/or happy a lot throughout the article. There are some sources that are current and some that are older. All of the content in this article is very well organized and there are many different sections.