User:Becky10/De'VIA/Breannadooling Peer Review

Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?


 * I was a bit confused that the title was De'VIA, but the article focused primarily on Surdism, which was presented as a movement similar to De'VIA, but not actually the core of De'VIA itself, if that makes sense-- maybe change the actual title to Surdism and link to your page from the De'VIA page itself?
 * It looks like you currently have a big quote which isn't really introduced or explained; it reads as an abrupt transition as it stands

Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?


 * I think the use of "we" throughout the quote could be perceived as a bias of sorts, and should be either changed to third person in discussion of the ideas, or noted as a point of potential bias

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?


 * I think that just having the one big quote draws a little heavily from one source (I'm assuming it's from the same place) without breaking it up at all or bringing in other views

Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?


 * I wasn't able to see any citations. I'm not sure if this was what the "manifesto of surdism" written at the end of most sections was referencing, but from my view there were no working links for citations
 * Also the article is in quotes and I was wondering if this is a quote from a single source? As a viewer I am unable see the source of the quote, if so

Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?


 * I didn't see any citations to back up the information throughout your article

Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?


 * The information you have seems good! The intro part was all relevant. Maybe more of a tie back to De'VIA overall