User:BeeCandelaria/Monte Verde/Isaacsj3 Peer Review

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Hi Bee,

All the information you've added is wonderful! I think one part that I want to know more about is the uncertainties surrounding MV-I. Are CH-I or CH-II also uncertain dates or were they not affected by glacial outwash in the same way? An interesting thing to note is that, if outwash from glaciers buries parts of MV-I, that effectively provides a date since the sites have to have existed during/before the glacial maximum. Has any climate research been utilized?

I don't know if this is within your scope, but I think it would be really interesting to have a part of the history section that specifically talks about Monte Verde's progression from controversy to generally accepted (or more accepted!). As long as the site information comes first, I don't think it detracts from its importance to talk more about the controversy. That being said, I really like the revisions you made with moving information around. Good work!