User:Behanjac/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor - I am evaluating this article

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this issue, because it appears to be missing a lot of content and some background information.

Evaluate the article
Is the content up-to-date? - The Andy Schor article is not fully up to date. While the most recent information says that Schor was re-elected mayor of Lansing in 2021, the article doesn't provide any information past this date. The article does not provide any information about current policies he has passed or implemented in the City of Lansing.

Is there content that is missing or consent that does not belong? - The only two sections that the article has is about his early life and education and his career. There is a lot of missing content in ways of political plans and accomplishments he has done for the City of Lansing. Even when the about the article talks about the 2021 election, they don't go into detail about how many votes Mayor Schor received and that his opponent was then Councilwoman Kathie Dunbar.

Does the article include images that enhance the understanding of the topic? - While the article does show one picture of the mayor, there are no additional pictures that help enhance the understanding of his accomplishments. The profile picture they use for the mayor was actually taken in 2018, so this is the most recent picture we have of him.

Does the lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? - The article does a great job in the introductory sentence  in describe the articles topic. It lets the reader know that Any Schor is the 52nd Mayor of Lansing, Michigan. It also lets the reader know how old he is. I feel like this introductory sentence is very comparable to other political figures Wikipedia pages about them.

Is the lead concise or is it overly detailed? - I do not think the lead is overly detailed, no. I feel like it is very concise in what it is setting up for the reader, but does leave out a lot of information. Along with the rest of the article, the lead leaves out any achievements or current policies he is known for. Most leads typically add a little about the subjects background in the lead, but this article does not, it leaves it for another sections.