User:BelM 242/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Vestibular ganglion - Wikipedia

Why have you chosen this article to evaluate?
As a current neurobiology minor and aspiring neurosurgeon, I am very interested in the fields of neuroscience and anatomy. I believe there is a lot to be learned in reference to different brain areas and seeing that this article is rather lacking would love to contribute and clarify information contained within it all whilst helping contribute to expanding others knowledge on lesser known about neurological structures.

Evaluate the Article
Whilst the information presented within the article is relevant to the topic it is incredibly dated and overly concise missing a large portion of current research and information regarding the ganglion. The tone is neutral and balanced however the overall information about the structure is overrepresented in comparison to the other sections listed in the article with the remaining sections being either completely absent of information or severely underrepresented. The article is lacking any sort of imagery despite numerous diagrams of the structure being available copyright free and on the internet. The structure is a great starting point however needs to be built upon immensely.

In order to effectively better the article and improve upon the data being provided, I suggest the following edits be made:


 * Update and add a significant amount of more references and citations. in particular to the structure section.
 * Clarify the wording in regard to the structure and location. Construct a linear map of the ganglion through words and making use of diagrams.
 * Clearly flesh out and present the information instead of condensing the bulk of it into one or two sentences per subtopic
 * Enhance upon the Etymology and Development sections in particular
 * If possible, add sections about its relevance to research and possible functions it may have.
 * Link this page to Vestibular ganglion aka Scarpa's ganglion - Wikipedia