User:Belanelson/Pastoral Neolithic/Mdg132 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Belanelson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Pastoral Neolithic


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pastoral Neolithic

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Sixteen references give the article a very high notability rating. The lead section of the article is very strong, concise, and clear in explaining what the Pastoral Neolithic is to the reader. The contents table effectively guides the reader, and the headings are well placed. This article sustains a neutral tone throughout the presentation of all the material in my opinion. I did not spot any grammatical or spelling errors from the reading. There are helpful links to other articles throughout the article as well.