User:Bella088/Skin-walker/BundlesofRoses013 Peer Review

User:Bella088/Skin-walker/BundlesofRoses013 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bella088


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bella088/Skin-walker
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Skin-walker

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Bella088!,

I noticed there isn't much in your drafts yet but that's okay! I know it can be a bit difficult to find accurate sources for your topic! Here are some things I suggest that would be good to put into your article!


 * 1) Definitions!   - There were a lot of terms that I noticed didn't have links to explain what they were or a sub section that explains the terminology! So it would be a nice contribution to maybe add a "defintions" section for those of us who aren't well informed with Navajo language.
 * 2) Adding More Info   - I feel as though there may be some information missing in the "Background" and "Legends" section! Maybe adding more information to these would round them out more!

Overall the article has accurate information and neutral tones to it, so hopefully you can find more things to add to the article!