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'''Activity 2: Find an article on a topic that you are interested in or are knowledgeable about. Have a look at the first substantial edit on that page through its revision history. If you had created this article first - what would you have done differently? If you were the second reader, how would you have edited the article? Write up your thoughts on your user page (100-200 words is plenty).'''

Article I found: Auckland: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Auckland What I would have done differently: I would have said where Auckland is located in New Zealand, which is the North Island. I would have provided a photo as well as to Auckland's location in New Zealand as well as photos of the city. Overall just would have put in more depth and detail than the one paragraph given, perhaps elaborating on how the city was founded/settled, so its history and climate etc. As well as adding more overall structure.

If I was the second reader I would have edited the article by adding to the major industries which the author had begun to describe. More importantly, I would have found sources to back up what the author has said as nothing was cited and fact checked what was said.

Tutorial 4, Week 6 Activity:

11-1pm tutorial. The lesson on formatting helped me know how to cite my sources and link certain words to their own wikipedia articles for my future article, as well has how to set out my articles with headings and subheadings.