User:Bellajlang/Jacalyn Lopez Garcia/Mgn23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bellajlang


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bellajlang/Jacalyn_Lopez_Garcia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jacalyn Lopez Garcia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * Lead: the lead is clear and concise and is not overly detailed.
 * Content: The content is relevant to the topic. This topic deals with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps and provides information about a Chicana artist, a historically underrepresented group.
 * Tone: It's overall tone is neutral, but the last sentence of the Early Life and Education section can be taken as a statement that is formed from an opinion
 * Sources: A majority of the sources are books and news sources so they seem reliable
 * Organization: The content is well organized
 * Images: N/A