User:Bellamarciano/Insomnia/Allie2004 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bellamarciano


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bellamarciano/Insomnia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Insomnia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think this draft has good information in it however the author didn't include a lead section so I am finding it difficult to see what they changed. Additionally the draft has an awkward format that may have just been some kind of error as it does not look like it was done intentionally. The second section of the draft (which I believe is the authors own words) reads more like an essay and less like a wikipedia entry. That being said, after looking at the original article, I believe that the section added by the author is relevant to the topic and provides new information that isn't already covered in the original article.