User:Bellamarciano/Insomnia/Ashley.n.reyes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bellamarciano


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bellamarciano/Insomnia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The paragraph is well written and relevant to the article. It provides added information that is very easy for one to understand and makes the article more complete. Because the topic of the article doesn't have two sides to it, it is balanced and neutral. The strength of this article is that it provides examples which helps the reader understand the added information very well. Not much needs to be added, I feel that it was very well done.