User:Bellamarciano/Insomnia/Egmuehlb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bellamarciano


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bellamarciano/Insomnia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Insomnia

Evaluate the drafted changes
You said that people who suffer from chronic illness suffer from insomnia.. possibly add some examples of those chronic illnesses, and maybe a short description for an illness. Alzheimers, Epilepsy, Parkinsons, etc. can cause insomnia. Do people experience different symptoms with short term insomnia versus long term? Any treatments or medications that you found while reading? Overall, good entry, I myself love reading anything related to medicine. Don't forget to add a few more citations in the beginning.