User:Bellamarciano/Insomnia/Mimitee123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bellamarciano


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bellamarciano/Insomnia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you chose a very interesting topic and more people should be aware of the different issues insomnia may cause. You get the information across, but I think that you need to improve the structuring of some of your sentences and that you were a bit repetative but besides that everything seems good! I just checked and I think that you need to add one more source because I only see two.