User:Bellamrome/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating Sunnyside Christian High School

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article as it is one of the few private high schools near the city that I am from. I have had friends that I met after high school graduation who go here, as well as extended family members. I think this would be a great article to expand on Wikipedia because of the town it is in, as well as the fact that it has been functioning since the mid 1900s. When I first came across this stub article, I knew it needed to be updated and expanded upon as there is only a short sentence and just some general information about the school. There was not much more to go off of other than that.

Evaluate the article
Leading- While the article seems to only have one leading sentence, it does not include many sections of information for readers. Updated and much more detail of the school can be added to improve the article.

Content- Some additions to this article can be history, classroom structure and graduation statistics, demographics, around the area, where it originated from and its mission, the faculty, academic awards, athletics, what's offered, etc. I think these additions could be great for future readers who are interested in the school or those similar. Pictures of the school, unique structures and the logo could also be beneficial for the success of the article.

Viewpoints or Controversy- While a school may not contain many controversial topics (or any) from outside sources, those should be explained with just facts rather than opinions on if this is a "good" school or not for children. I also think within the demographics, that there should be a chart or some sort of explanation of diversity within the school.

Outside Resources- Since this article is short, it could be useful for other references to be added for the information provided above, rather than the single external link from the school itself, which is no longer in service. Some more useful resources that can be cited and added are school awards (distinction awards) or private schooling awards received. It seems based off of the previous revisions of the article that very few additions/updates were made since August 2023.

Organization and Media- I think it would be best as well when making these or other additions that it is clearly organized in a way for others to read smoothly. For example, after the leading section, history (include image), where it originated and the mission of the school, around the area (image may be useful here), demographics (pie chart maybe), what's offered, student life/athletics (include image), classroom/statistics, academics and awards (image), faculty, and maybe an ending extracurricular that offered (if any). I think the information box is a perfect idea and spot, but with that, it can be jazzed up a little more to portray the accuracy of the school. Too many images may be distracting, but nonetheless, a couple should be used for the quality of the article.

Overall, there is not much starting information, however with some careful researching and additions I think it could become a great and quality article.