User:Bellamrome/Sunnyside Christian High School/Biancamsalgado Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BellaMRome


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bellamrome/Sunnyside Christian High School
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sunnyside Christian High School

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

- As a fellow Sunnyside resident I think that you have provided a great background as to the Sunnyside Cristian High School.

-Your introduction lays a strong foundation for what is to come. For there being no introduction in the current article I think you created a good example of what one should look like.

Content:

- From what I see your content is very relevant to this date. However, I would suggest perhaps adding in some current information on current events going on? Or like traditions that this school has? Maybe like what this school is most known for.

Tone and Balance:

-The article is not biased, and has a good neutral tone! I think you should keep going with this tone. Do not change anything about this.

Sources and References:

- I see that you have grabbed statistics from the school official website and online informational websites that provide statistics on the school. I would suggest further continuing with your research process by looking at articles/webpages around the similar realm.

Organization:

-I like the structure of your article! I like how you started with history, and then went onto what is offered such as curricular activities.

Images and Media:

- Since there are no images, I would suggest going on the school website and finding high quality images of the school mascot, events, student body and even staff!

Overall impressions:

-I think that you are off to a really good start. You have created the foundation of the article as there was not that much information implemented before. I think that the overall things you could improve on are, including more information on what this high school is most known for? Such as some traditions that this high school has. Other than that you have done a good job at keeping a neutral tone, using good references, proving relevant information, and structuring your article! I will also add that in the future you should add some pictures to make it more interactive and appealing to the eye for those who enjoy pictures.