User:Bellamrome/Sunnyside Christian High School/Huskyhero Peer Review

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Bellamrome
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bellamrome/Sunnyside Christian High School
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sunnyside Christian High School

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Wow, your draft is amazing! I don't even know where to start since you really gave the page a lot of awesome new content. Everything in the article is relevant to the topic, and nothing distracted me. The article is neutral and nothing seemed bias to me at all. None of your viewpoints were over or underrepresented. All of your citations work and the sources support your claims in the article. All of your facts are supported by reliable references as well, and they all seem to be neutral sources. Nothing seems to be out of date. Good job on adding a lead to the article, and describing the mission of the school for its students as well as it being known for its clubs, athletics, and academics. I really like that you added a history section as well so we can see how and when the school started and what its become from then until now. Great job mentioning the demographics as well so that we can know what the diversity is like, this can help parents that may want to enroll their kids at this school one day. Adding some of the offered extra-curriculars, the quality of the curriculum, and highlights that makes the school look good was a smart choice as this really helps us understand more about the school and gives it a positive outlook in our eyes as readers. My only suggestion is to add some pictures of and about the school so that it can fully bring the article to life and we can see what this place look like! Great job!