User:Bellamrome/Sunnyside Christian High School/JasmineNJ Peer Review

General info
Bellamrome
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bellamrome/Sunnyside_Christian_High_School?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * A heading you can add since you mentioned it that they had in the school is the extracurricular activities
 * instead of it saying "whats offered" you can title it "extracurricular" since the title you have on it its a bit broad because a lot of things could be offered in a school.
 * You can add graduation rates too to give more statistical evidence
 * add if its an IB or AP school
 * Add the demographic % to really emphasize the diversity that the school had in the "Demographics" section.
 * Talk about Clubs in a different section than extracurricular because it could be confusing adding a physical sport to things that are partaken in a classroom
 * so far I like the headings added!