User:Bellarubyroo/Misogyny in rap music/Aislinb Peer Review

General info
Bellarubyroo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bellarubyroo/Misogyny in rap music
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Misogyny in rap music

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the article and the changes made clearly define misogyny in rap music in a clear and non-biased way. The author explains the impact it has and where it originated from while offering different points of view. The article doesn't lean towards a certain narrative, but it rather clear cut and simply describes the impact it has, who it affects, and what is being done about it. The part of the article that was edited is well written and has no grammar flaws. It is clear what is trying to be said.