User:Bellasantiago/sandbox

Comment from Heather 9/25
Isabella- Did you have a chance to watch the video in Introduction to Week 5? It will help you set this Sandbox up better. It should have a work log with dates, a copy of the article you're editing, and more specific suggestions about changes you might make, including a few sources. I provided a heading for the two sentences you did contribute below, so you can see how it should look. There is a catch-up week coming up, so plan to work on this soon, okay? Let me know if you have questions.

What I'm working on:
I noticed that the article I have chosen is weak in some areas. I think that some sentences are a little awkward or vague.