User:Bellcharles/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(Body shape)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because in terms of developmental biology, it is the end result of the developmental process of a human.

Evaluate the article
Evaluate an article

Lead section

The wording of the lead section is, at times, uneccessarily complex which leads to the introduction of the topic not being as concise as it could be. The distribution of linked topic pages also could be improved in order to have a better flow should the reader need to access the addtional information to better understand the topic. The lead section also does not introduce the sections of the article beyond the first.

Content

A good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.

The content provided in the article is relevant to the topic presented but in the content section of the article there is less depth into the topic than would be desired by a reader wishing to learn more than a surface level view of the topic.

The wording of the article could be updated to be more inclusive with regards to members of the transgender and non-binary community. The wording also tends towards a male chauvinistic tone.

Sources and References

While there are many sources for this article listed, the majority are more than 10 years out of date and several stem from a weight-centric view which could alienate a demographic of potential readers.

The images in the article only represent a small section of the listed body types referenced in the article which could alienate those readers who are not that body-type.