User:BelleKahlua/Evolution of the Human Oral Microbiome/BartHarleyJarvis Peer Review

First off, I want to say how thankful I am to have been assigned your article for peer review, as Biological Anthropology, and even evolutionary medicine, are two areas that I just think are so interesting and applicable. I learned a lot from reviewing your page, especially regarding the techniques section, as you did a really great job of breaking down such a complex process in bite-size chunks that are understandable. I also found it extremely interesting how the disease-oriented shift in oral microbiome make-up aligns very well with human jaw shrinkage, which I wrote about for my article, both in terms of timing, and its causes/etiology. Interestingly, some of the research I referenced also mentioned how changes in jaw rest position likely contributed to oral microbiome changes as well.

I've left you comments throughout the page, suggesting certain edits/rephrasing's/links to other articles, and I've also suggested further clarifications, especially for your everyday readers. Overall, I think you did a great job on this, as it was easy to understand for such a complex topic, and the progression/flow to the article made sense, so organization is not an issue.

General info

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(provide username) BelleKahlua


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 * User:BelleKahlua/Evolution of the Human Oral Microbiome


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