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Myoglobin

This article from Wikipedia provides basic information about myoglobin.


 * The information provided in this article is relevant to myoglobin. It is somewhat sparse in details in some areas (i.e. differences from hemoglobin, structure and bonding)
 * The article is neutral; no claims were made that indicate preference to one side or another.
 * The links are functional. There are a few paragraphs with citations needed
 * Add two images of myoglobin vs hemoglobin to show the structural differences between them
 * In the talk page, other editors have pointed out inconsistencies and grammatical errors. They also noted some missing information that could enhance the quality of the article.

Women in STEM: Martha Annie Whiteley
 * There is a brief article associated with Martha Annie Whiteley
 * I am hoping to add more biographical information about Martha Annie Whitely, in addition to her contributions to her field of science
 * If I can find what she did to make her noteworthy, I will discuss her significance in her field

Lead: Martha Annie Whiteley is a British chemist who was instrumental in advocating for women's entry into the Chemical Society Additionally, she was the first female chemistry teacher on staff at the Royal College of Science.

Biography: Whiteley was born on November 11,1866 in Chelsea London to her father, William Sedgewick Whiteley and mother, Hannah Bargh. Her family moved to Hammersmith when she was six years old. Her mother passed away in the 1870s, after which her father remarried Mary Bargh Turner Clark in 1880.
 * Contributions to Science: Whiteley co-authored "A Students' Manual of Organic Chemical Analysis: Qualitative and Quantitative" with

Peer Review: Elizabeth Innis
I can absolutely relate to not being able to find good sources of information about your woman in STEM! If you need help accessing sources or tips on finding stuff, feel free to reach out to me.

That being said, I felt like your article was a little too thin. If you can find something, I would love to know about the Women's Association and her contributions to it.

I also thought the formatting could be adjusted. Right now it feels pretty choppy, maybe try putting things in longer paragraphs. P.S. I really like the side panel you indluded with a summary of major details about her!

Resources:
 * Creese, M. R. S. The British Journal for the History of Science 1991, 24 (3), 275–305. British women of the nineteenth and early twentieth centuries who contributed to research in the chemical sciences
 * Nicholson, R. M.; Nicholson, J. W. Journal of Chemical Education 2012, 89 (5), 598–601. Martha Whiteley of Imperial College, London: A Pioneering Woman Chemist
 * Barrett, A. World Scientific 2017, 69-76. Women At Imperial College; Past, Present And Future