User:Bellis24/Deaf education/Scino23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bellis24, Cbaer9, Beebedell, Dognast


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Bellis24/Deaf_education&veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Deaf education

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think you guys have a good base for additions to this article! I like that you are helping to expand information about deaf education around the globe. Your tone was pretty consistently unbiased, but be careful of words like "unfortunately" in the Australia section that give a bias to the information. Also, I know this is a rough draft, but make sure to include your sources. Also link to related pages like "Andrew Foster" for more information. I like that the Nigeria section mentions at the end how successful deaf education has been in that country. If you could find information with those kind of statistics about how the countries' different approaches work well or not when it comes to Deaf people's graduation and employment rates, I think that would be interesting and important to include. Maybe think about adding some photos of these schools as well! Scino23 (talk) 23:50, 19 March 2022 (UTC)