User:BenBri/Qu'Appelle River/Cumberland107 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BenBri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:BenBri/Qu'Appelle River


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Qu'Appelle River

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Perhaps it would be beneficial to discuss what information you are hoping to add to the existing article. Also it could be beneficial to break up the information being presented more, rather than just a block of facts. Once that information is broken up it would be beneficial to give the sections relevant headings. Also the wording of the ice cover fact is slightly confusing, perhaps there is an alternative phrasing that better communicates your information. The article link works well and seems to be a solid source but multiple sources are necessary. Find some way to build on the existing article.