User:BenBri/Qu'Appelle River/Eitamh Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BenBri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BenBri/Qu'Appelle_River?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Qu'Appelle River - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

What you have so far looks good, but obviously you'll need to add more.

It seems like you're talking about multiple lakes in this article within the Qu'Appelle River system, so I would suggest starting off with naming all of those lakes for the lead and maybe defining what makes a lake part of this system. If you can find information like size, depth, and biology of each individual lake, it would be good to put that info in for each lake as well. Then, you could go into talking about research done on the lakes.

Your reference you have looks good, but for the other references you find, I would try to make them more recent. Katie told me our references should ideally be published within the last 10 years.