User:BenBri/South Saskatchewan River/EricDart Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BenBri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BenBri/South_Saskatchewan_River?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * South Saskatchewan River

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

As your article already exists you might want to copy the original lead into your draft and edit it to include a brief introduction into what you are talking about if needed.

Conent:

It is all relevant to the river and the article as a whole. However the linmonlogy section seems a bit unorganized in sporatic, maybe try reworking the structure of it or splitting it up to make it easier to understand. Also has there been any long term research going in in the river? You might want to make sure all of your data is entered correctly (what is Medicine Hat?)

Tone/balance

The tone comes across as neutral and unbiased.

Sources/ references

Your sources are good and seem well represented in the work. You might want to go through and potentially link some key words to other Wikipedia articles so you don't have to describe them in the article itself.

Images:

You so far have not added any images from what I can see