User:BenBri/South Saskatchewan River/Hez28 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * I think your article is well structured. You describe the background information of the South Saskatchewan River very clearly. Although you have repeated some of the content already explained in the South Saskatchewan River wiki, these are basic information about the river. If you can find other information that is not explained in the original wiki, it would be better!
 * I think your description of the landform elements in the river is very good, and your description of the chemical substances contained in the river and the description of the organisms in the river is very detailed.
 * For some other rivers, such as "Bow River", "Oldman River", and "Red Deer River", I think you can consider adding hyperlinks so that people can easily understand the information about these rivers.
 * Your draft is approximately 500 words, so remember to add more content before you finish. For additional content, I suggest that you can write more information about the causes of river formation and river ecology.
 * And I think you can add more references to help you find new information that you can add.

In general, I think you wrote very well, please keep writing!