User:BenBri/South Saskatchewan River/Wiki limno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BenBri


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BenBri/South_Saskatchewan_River?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Ben, Lizzy here. As far as grading goes, you were a bit short on the word count so I had to take 2pts off. In general, your writing style is effective and I think you made good use of your citations. Don't forget about the option to link to other Wikipedia pages (Ctr+K or use the link button at the top) this can really help develop the article for the everyday reader.

Comment for introduction: Described as a river but then later in the paragraph you say " Hydroelectric plants are used on the lake as well as irrigation for the surrounding agricultural lands." Clarification here would be helpful.

Body paragraphs: You have good general limnological information overall, but as you move towards the final draft make sure you focus on research that has been done on this area and the findings that have come from it. Let us know if you have questions.