User:BenDUpolcom/Black women in American politics/LAP2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BenDUPolCom


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BenDUpolcom/Black_women_in_American_politics?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Black women in American politics

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

The lead is empty.

Content:

The only content is a statistic about black women voting in the 2020 election. This is slightly relevant, but is inadequate by itself. It is up to date. There is definitely a lot of content that could be added to this page.

Tone and Balance:

The content added is neutral, as it is simply citing a statistic.

Sources and References:

The content is cited. It is accurate to the source, and in fact quotes the source word-for-word, which is unnecessary. Looking at the bibliography, there are no sources actually cited beside example articles about palm trees. The source that is cited in the article draft may not be the most reputable as it is from Forbes website, and could be biased. Because there is only one source, the article definetly needs more sources to provide more information and depth on the subject.

Organization:

The content is not well written, as most of it is copy-pasted from the source on the article, essentially plagiarism. There is simply not enough in the article to judge it completely.

Overall Impressions:

The article needs more information, more sources, and better sources. There is already an existing article, but based on the sandbox draft, its unclear if the user is writing a new article or adding information to a pre-existing section.