User:BenDUpolcom/Black women in American politics/LaurenLainez Peer Review

The content is relevant to the topic but most of the sentence is direct quotes and not any paraphrasing. The source used does have a lot of information so it could be beneficial to add some more information from the article to this draft. The source comes from a reliable news site and was updated in 2023 so it is very current information. The tone is very neutral since it is just direct quotes from the article. It was also unclear where in the article this statement would be placed. Overall, more detail and paraphrasing instead of directly quoting could help improve the draft, although the source is relevant, reliable and has lots of information covered that could be beneficial for this article.

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