User:BenFilangeri/Sybil Ludington/Juliancamilo17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(BenFilangeri)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BenFilangeri/Sybil_Ludington?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article was very interesting to me because i grew up learning about Paul Revere but never heard of Ludington. The content added is goes with the topic and really fits in nicely as Ben compares the two. The lead does include an introductory sentence and does talk about the articles major topics. The lead is just enough and not too long so it makes a great intro. The content is precise and the way Ben put it made sense when reading it. The content is not neutral as Ben thinks that Ludington did much more then Paul Revere. Not only does Ben say this but continues by showing examples and explaining why she should be talked about more then Paul Revere. Ben talks about both sides and adds in dates and significant events. Yes the content is all backed up by sources that are updated. I really enjoyed reading this, the only thing i can say is that maybe make it a bit longer and dive into Ludington's life a bit more. I think that it would make the article even stronger but other then that. Ben got straight to the point and made it clear. The article is much more complete with what Ben added with some facts and interesting ones about Ludington since she actually rode by his town. Great work!