User:Ben Vercellino1/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose Andy Schor because he is a mayor of an important city in Michigan, who does not have a lot of information about him available on his wikipedia page.

Evaluate the article
The article's lead has a good first sentence that describes what the article is about. Beyond that, the rest of the brief is lacking any information based off the fact that there is not really any other information in the article.

The overall tone of the article is neutral. It only covers his election history and nothing about what he has done as mayor of Michigan.

The sources for the article are all decent quality. This is mostly because they are articles that are just posting election results and do not have anything to do with the changes he has brought to Lansing.

The article can be improved by including more on what Andy Schor has accomplished as mayor as that is what is the most pertinent information in the article. It could also include what he did in his other elected positions.

Overall, the article does a good job at being neutral, but needs to include more information about what he has been doing