User:Bendetwiler/Metabolic window/Xlbdc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bendetwiler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bendetwiler/Metabolic_window?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted change
I overall think that you did a really good job editing this article.I think that the opening paragraph has a great overview of what this article will discuss. It looks like you did some really good research and added good details. I think you did a good job keeping the tone throughout the article neutral and were stating factual information. The sources from the article seem to be reliable. All the information you added makes the article better.

There were only a couple of things I thought you could change or add. The first thing I noticed was a minor spelling error, it was in the third paragraph the word fueled is spelt incorrectly. Another thing that I think might help your article is adding in more sections. I think that making a lead section with more of just an overview of the metabolic window would be good. I would then maybe add a couple new sections to try and separate and organize some of the other information in the article. Maybe make the overview, what is metabolic window, and types of nutrition sections. I think this will help make the information easier to locate in the article. Another thing I think that I would add is a few pictures that relate to the topic.