User:Benevolent Bat/Communication noise/Thedailyplanet1938 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Benevolent Bat


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Benevolent%20Bat/Communication_noise?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Communication noise

Evaluate the drafted changes
Benevolent Bat's contribution to the Communication noise article is a short -- yet to to the point -- definition of physiological noise. The contribution is one sentence in length, and is taken directly from the "Communicating at Work" textbook (which was properly cited). It is grammatically correct and devoid of spelling mistakes. It is a necessary and useful contribution, as physiological noise is in fact an important aspect of communication noise as a whole. However, I suggest that Benevolent Bat adds several examples of physiological noise to the section.