User:Benhansen11/Communication theory/Makenna.luke Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Benhansen11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ABenhansen11%2FCommunication_theory&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&redirect=no


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Communication theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your addition of authentic cultural communication into this article is a really addition it gives a new perspective to the article that hasn’t been shown yet. I also think that you do a good job at being very concise in your writing about it. One thing to fix would be the capitalization before each of the bullet points in this section of examples.

I also thought that the culture based situation conflict model addition was very good I would like to see the image in the draft to get a sense of what you are going to be adding but I think it would be a good thing to add.

You will also have to add more sources to this paper it looks like in your references section they are added twice which may just have been an accident but it is something to look into

Overall I thought these additions will be very beneficial to the overall paper and you are on the right track when it comes to the rough draft.