User:Benjamsredcob/Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on neurological, psychological and other mental health outcomes/JoJo Miranda Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Benjamsredcob


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Benjamsredcob/Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on neurological, psychological and other mental health outcomes - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Impact of the COVID-19 pandemic on neurological, psychological and other mental health outcomes - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is easy to read and very straightforward. ￼ It's very concise and it is enough information to understand what the article is going to be about. ￼ Advice to make the lead clearer would going back to where there are red lines and seeing how it could be either corrected or ignored to have those lines disappear. Bibliography was good but the last citation needs to be properly cited. ￼ The same advice will apply for the red lines in the bibliography.

Response: Thank you for the review of my article. I will properly cite the sources and add more info when I get the chance. I will see how I can make the info a bit more clear